It has potential, but after the vocal part is done it sort of repeats "now" or something for ever and ever. I think if you slowly faded out of that it would sound better than repeating it again and again. It kinda drowns out the music. I agree that you need another addition, but I don't think a piano is the answer. Possibly a synth of some sort though. At any rate, it's getting there. Keep up the good work.
Yap. I know exactly what you want to say... Well,i think have to do something "special" after the second vocal part. I'll do my best :)
A Synth?hm... Might be better.I agree.
Thanks for you'r review !
I could be wrong... but this doesn't seem like blues to me.
GodDAMMIT. Read the description. It's ALL blues.
Hah, is punk music really starting to merge with trance? You might be starting a new world order ;) Lol, what a combo. Great song, keep up the good work.
thanks man, i will!! :)
If nothing else, this thing definitely has a beat :) I love Drum N Bass but it definitely needs to be longer. Also, something isn't quite right in this song and I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the bass that sounds so distorted it doesn't carry much bass maybe? Hope that helps a bit. Anyway, keep up the good work and check out my stuff if you get a sec :)
thx for the comment, it sure helps :)
i don't have much patience so my songs are never that long , but i'll try to work on it. Gonna check out your stuff in a minute ;)
It's super short and it sounds a lot like a video game song, which is always good :) I'm not quite sure what it is that sounds off... maybe the bass and the melody don't quite mix and so they try to cancel eachother out and make it sound bad... but it was a good concept :) Keep up the good work and check out my stuff if you get a chance.
Pretty well done. I know you were going for an overwhelming bass, but I think it may be a tad bit too loud. My headphones are trying to scoop out my brains... It's a bit too slow also. But it's not too terrible. Keep up the good work.
thanks again i kno what u mean tho this was my first song i made didnt realy know bout equaling the shizz out but iam gettting betta but thanks braah
I'm starting to hate all the trance songs that sound alike and all that. This really stands apart from them. It really sucks you into a dancing hell :P Keep up the good work.
thanks braah it the first of many hopefully lol and i'll keep on try but first i need a better music program
Heh, thanks for reviewing my song(s). Thought I'd come and check this one out. It's pretty good. Since you've heard my song, it probably won't come as a shock that this is a bit too light-hearted for my tastes, but still pretty good. I like the laid back feeling of it. Keep up the good work :)
I'd continue it. There might be some candy ravers out there willing to hear it. As for me, I'll stick to the darker stuff :) Keep up the good work and check out my stuff if you get a chance.
Not too bad. A little to uplifting for me, but meh, that's just me. Pretty damn good remix. Love the different voices all going at once. Keep up the good work.
Check out my stuff if you get a chance.
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