Potential
It has potential, but after the vocal part is done it sort of repeats "now" or something for ever and ever. I think if you slowly faded out of that it would sound better than repeating it again and again. It kinda drowns out the music. I agree that you need another addition, but I don't think a piano is the answer. Possibly a synth of some sort though. At any rate, it's getting there. Keep up the good work.